A Firsthand Murder Ballad
🗡A FIRSTHAND MURDER BALLAD
Heavily inspired by American Murder Songs’ Murder Ballads of 1816: The Year Without a Summer, especially songs such as Murder! Murder!, June, and Edward, A Firsthand Murder Ballad is a WIP colonial era fantasy interactive fiction game. It is hosted on Itch.io, made with Twine, and will be free from start to finish.
The war’s victory was not a joyous affair. There was no celebration when the encroaching forces were routed from the land. No drinking. No parties. No cheering or tearful greetings from spouses who had not seen one another in nearly a decade.
The silence was unmistakable. Loud. Overwhelming.
There was no joy to be found in it.
The removal of enemy soldiers from Herritus was instead met by one of the bleakest seasons to have ever settled over the country’s south. Crops and livestock died of the cold, infants were unable to be roused from their frigid sleep, and chromatia returned from its grave with wretched determination.
The streets are deserted- not a soul travels the worn roads. The homeless freeze to death and community shelters across the nation are wrung dry. Not even a noble such as yourself is safe from the cold’s grip.
It seeps in through the cracked windows, through the gaps under the doors. Your fire cannot douse it. No matter how many lanterns you light, the shudders will not be dispelled. You don a dozen layers; it finds a way through each.
When you are diagnosed with the grey ruin and made to realize you may have only a few months left to live, you must take it upon yourself to remove any remaining loose ends- before the sickness takes you.
And yet...something is wrong in the town of Nērisk. Something impossible is happening. And someway, somehow, it all ties back in to your brother’s murder twenty years prior.
🗡FEATURES
- Customize your MC, including their gender (with options for women, men, and nonbinary MCs) and pronouns (supports multiple sets and custom input), appearance, and skills.
- MC’s personality is semi-set. You can shift the way they develop and how they react to some situations, but some facets of themself will always be set.
- Optionally romance any of 9 options, with 10 poly routes available, including one quad (four person) option.
- Discover that not everything in Nērisk is as it seems, and that you cannot put your past behind you quite so easily...
- You are not the hero of this story. Rediscover old friends, and with them, old vices you thought you’d overcome.
🗡ROMANCE
Florain Vettikar [M/F]: An individual from your past you held dear (ex-best friend or ex-lover), taken from you too soon as karmic retribution. They’re long dead...but that doesn’t mean they’re gone.
Aviri von Jhersten [NB]: Someone you knew long ago. Their hands and yours are stained with the same blood, yet they were the one to claim guilt for the fresh grave. Now, they return, with new money and old vendettas.
Cillian Rittaker [M/NB/F]: You had seen Cillian once in passing as a child, a poor orphan your mother had shooed you away from. Nowadays, ze’s a powerful healer...and Nērisk’s final bastion against the chromatia.
Liel Amorson [M/F]: A childhood friend. You haven’t seen them in the decades since their family was forced to flee Nērisk, but now they return. You’d think they hadn’t changed at all if not for the emptiness in their eyes.
Acrocantus vel Yurius [M]: A son of the king of a distant country, who ran to Nērisk to escape his father and his homeland. He’s completely out of his depth...and is paying you to let him stay in your manor.
Ueryphus el Lirisis [NB]: Vel Yurius’ personal guard. They don’t trust you, and maybe they’re right not to. Still, they manage being unhappily polite, if only due to your extended grace when it comes to housing them.
Niphiles Ivares [F]: A wanderer, constantly coming and going. You’ve seen her around a few times, maybe even had a chat or two. Now, though, she’s trapped here in Nērisk, and growing increasingly paranoid…
Micah Kirrest [NB]: An annoyingly kind and persistent barkeep- and perhaps the only person you can call friend. Recently, you’d been separated, and now ey refuse to leave your side...no matter the circumstances.
Allifair ve Ketimnar [M/F]: As a child, they were forced to train under the same church authority you were, and now, they’re a priest with that same church. They hide their guilt well with jokes and snark. Too well.
[Poly routes are Florain/Aviri, Florain/Liel, Florain/Micah, Aviri/Micah, Cillian/Niphiles, Cillian/Aviri, Cillian/Allifair, Liel/Micah, and Acrocantus/Ueryphus.]
[The four-person poly route is Florain/Liel/Micah.]
🗡META
i post about the game, including updates and answering asks, on Tumblr!: https://a-firsthand-murder-ballad.tumblr.com
remember to visit the in-game credit page through the sidebar and support the cool coding folk that made this possible because lord knows i would Not have figured it out on my own.
due to the way the multipronouns macro functions, sometimes when you enter more than one set of pronouns to be used, they will not all show up under the 'your current pronouns are _____, would you like to add another?' screen. fear not; your pronouns have still been added. they just don't appear due to the random nature of the pronoun selection. [example: you've inputted he/they/xem pronouns, only he/they pronouns appear on the 'add another' screen, but xe/xem pronouns will still be used throughout the story.]
the ONLY way to remove a set of pronouns after you have added them is to use the 'back' function on the sidebar to go back to a point in the story from before you added that set. this is on the end of the macro author, not mine, and there is no way for them to fix it, let alone for me (coding baby) to fix it.
game cover likely to change soon, i'm not happy with how it looks.
Status | In development |
Platforms | HTML5 |
Rating | Rated 4.9 out of 5 stars (19 total ratings) |
Author | azrael. |
Genre | Interactive Fiction |
Tags | Dark Fantasy, Text based |
Average session | About a half-hour |
Languages | English |
Development log
- Mini-update / typo fixOct 27, 2023
- Accessibility FixOct 13, 2023
- Demo ReleaseOct 13, 2023
Comments
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This isn't abandoned? isn't it...
it isn't! it's currently effectively on hiatus because i got very busy in my personal life (and ADHD said 'no'), but i will eventually circle back around to this! much to come in the later chapters :]
thank you for playing!
No worries at all! Life happens, and priorities shift. Looking forward to when you're able to circle back to it. Take your time, and I'll be here when you're ready to continue <3
You got such a similar name to me!! But ong super invested in this already, and I just know there's going to be sm heart ache and angst😖 Have a super great week author!<3
Love it so much! Looks forward to ur next update:)
This is so beautifully written oh my god. Keep up the great work! :)
I didn't expect the music and it was a wonderful surprise indeed. The writing in the intro was haunting. The music in the prologue added so much towards the scene it actually made me emotional reading it. You are magnificent writer. There is so much emotion in the first few pages even I really felt for the MC. This was honestly really so great. The interface is pleasant and I can see you put your heart and soul into this so thank you. Rooting for you and looking forward to future updates. ♥️
omg ty?? i'm so glad you enjoyed it. i'm happy to hear that the emotions get across- and the music really is amazing. you can find other pieces by the composer here, he does great work.
i cannot wait to share the rest of my work ^^
Oh my Goodness, the background music is stellar and is the perfect complement to your gorgeous writing; it created a wonderful ambiance as I read the IF <3.
I'm very eager for the upcoming update and can't wait to meet the ROs ^^.
Tysm for the bloody brilliant demo!!
aahh tysm! the music really is amazing, the bgm in the dream sequence and the manor is both from Guilherme Bernardes on Pixabay and i've completely fallen in love with it. i'm glad the choice to include it paid off!
i am also very eager for you to meet the ROs. i can't give an ETA as i'm currently busy with another project but i'm hoping to have chapter one out before June of next year :] super happy to hear you enjoyed it!
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I recommend changing the text color because it is definitely too dark for black background and very hard to read and also add light mode (the lack of this effectively discourages some people from reading).
Hear hear, and maybe change the font too? Or an option to change fonts.
All I can see is curves and straight lines, my poor eyes TT
But the story is good so far, can't wait for the next update already (人 •͈ᴗ•͈)
hi there! yeah, i've been worried about this since i first started writing AFHMB because the template i'm using (yeah, i'm using a template </3) doesn't come with light mode OR (as the person below suggested) an option to change fonts. i will definitely be looking into doing both of these things, but a font change will likely be out FAR before a light mode drop, mostly because, in all honesty, i've never coded in a light mode before, plus the template uses some images for the layout that are grey-on-black that i'll have to figure out how to change. [but, yes, it will be happening. and yes, the grey text (?!?! why did i never notice it's grey. why is it grey.) will be turned white]
light mode & font selection are live :]